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Not you

Submitted by Mini on Fri, 2024-06-14 15:44

I wish you knew
That you madem e
Shed crystal droplets
From my russet
Silent mirors
Mademy words
Bleed everlastingly
And extinguished
My etemal flame
Just within
A moment's grace
Amidst I never envisioned
That you would do
Such astonishing thing
So I still can't believe
That you really did do that
It's not your reflection
It's not you soul

Style / type: 
Free verse
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Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft
Contest: 
Neopoet Weelky 06/02/24 to 06/08/24
Content level: 
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Fri, 2024-06-14 21:50

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