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Canine Mentor

Submitted by Michael Anthony on Thu, 2024-10-17 11:03

Our youngest dog, Indy,
insists on sleeping under the pillow
at my side. How well they’ve trained us,
our hearts I mean.

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing stage: 
Editing - polished draft
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

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Geezer

Thu, 2024-10-17 14:30

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we know exactly what you mean. They certainly have our best interests in mind, I mean, who wouldn't appreciate a warm, cuddly dog nestled in the bed with them? ~ Geez.
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