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KUNGAN'UKHETH'UKUNGSHIYA KULOMHLABA WOSIZI
IMPILO AY'KAZE YABA NOMUSA KIMI,
SELOKHU WAKHETH'UKUHAMBA WANG'SHIYA,
WANG'SHIYA NGEMBETHE INGUBO EYODWA NOSIZI,
MIHLA NAMALANGA,
NGINOK'BUK'ISTHOMBE SAKHO ZEHLE ZILANDELANA, NGIKHUMBULE,
IZIFISO NEK'SASA EBESIZ'MISELE NGOKULAKHA,KEPHA MANJE,
KONKE SEK'SHABALELE STHANDWASAMI KUNGANI?.
KUNGANI UKHETH'UKUNGSHIYA NGEDWA KULOMHLABA WOSIZI.
SENGAPHILA NGEZINYEMBEZI NOSIZI,
NG'BUYE NGIZ'DUDUZE,
NGITHI HLEZE KONKE KUYIPHUPH'ELIBI,
MANGIVUL'AMEHLO NGIZOK'BONA UMAMATHEKA,
KODWA NOMDALI AKABANGA NEQINISO KIMINA,
UBENGAK'THATHA KANJANI ANG'SHIYE MINA NGASALA NG'HLUPHEKA.
WAVUMA , WAHAMBA NAWE WAJUBALALA WANGAB' USABHEKA NASEMUVA,
KODWA USENZA KANJANI KUMINA ESINJENA ISIHLUKU?,
WASHIYA MINA WAKHETH' UK'SHADA NETHUNA,
NGIYE NGISWELE NAMANDLA OK'NYATHELA,
NGIZ'THOLE SENGIGUQE NGEDOLO NGIQALEKISA IZETHEMBISO,
NGIKE NGITHUK'THELE ,NGIKMEMEZE UNGASABELI MAQEDE NG'FUMBATH'INZONDO,
OKUNGENANI SINIKE ITHUBA LES'BILI UBUYE UZOLANDA NAMI ZE NGIMLANDELE HLEZE S'QHUBEKE NANGALE KWETHUNA.
USNETHEMBA UMHAYI
EYAMANGWANE LE.
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neopoet
Thu, 2024-10-17 16:10
Neopoet AI 5-29-23 version
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Candlewitch
Thu, 2024-10-17 10:14
a request
hello, can you please translate into English?
*
When someone reads your work
And responds, please be courteous
And reply in kind, thanks.
Obadiah Grey
Thu, 2024-10-17 11:43
Already in love with your
Already in love with your name -
can't wait to read your voice,
Obi.
mark
Thu, 2024-10-17 16:07
Drear IMBONGI YAMANGWANE
Hello and a big welcome to Neopoet for you.
You need to know that although we do our best here to accomodate the international community, Neopoet was born in the USA (New York) and therefore English is Neopoet's official language. Please make any further postings in the English language as best you can.
I could only translate the beginning of your poem and it is sad and you shold know that the web is full of broken heart poetry but we all need to express our feelings and it is a good write, so do translate it to English and re-post it as a new post if you will.
Thank you,
Mark (Administratve council Chair) https://www.neopoet.com/mark
"Ghosts of electricity howl in the bones of her face."
~Bob Dylan~
IMBONGI YAMANGWANE
Thu, 2024-10-17 16:46
Regarding the language I used to write my poem
Thank you for your feedback, from now on I promise to use English in order for everyone to understand the poem , and thanks for welcoming me
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