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Yes ,Summary Disposal
Yes,Summary Disposal
You are now falling out
In the wilderness
I hope some one shall come
To hold your hand
I am a positive person,
I only inject a positive injection
In the minds of those ailing
Or in life they’re trailing
Upon your soul,
Treat me as a total stranger,
God sent to bring you out
From a reverie,
That I see.
As science advances
In your time
Your minds eye
Will be instantly tapped
By microchips implanted
In the near future
Hopefully a new voice
You shall nurture.
The Alps or Thames
Are just the same destinations
But never in your confined cabin
Ever remain this is my reservation
Go explore the world,
Help yourself more,
You have to be thy self
Your own master for sure
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage:
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Comments
crypticbard
Sat, 2010-12-04 18:13
Inspiring!
An astute reminder that we are the masters of our fate. Thank you for sharing.
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loved
Mon, 2010-12-06 11:36
cryp
thank u ur kind to respond
‘Obama bowed
Also the crowd clapped
Then he vowed’
howz this haiku too
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