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When
When
we compose poetry
just think of others as fools ,,
who know not a wink
of what you want to convey,
in the darkness
as you wink at a beautiful gal,
you alone know what you'd do
but then twill be only you...
the world would continue to remain
dumbfounded
and
this the only one ,
you'd be who knew..
Style / type:
Free verse
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Comments
loved
Wed, 2012-05-02 16:05
At times you amaze me all of you here...
as we mostly dwell,
in a fallacious fantasy
that's about all
that we do...
loved