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Positively negative
See not only the dark side of life
there is more brightness
than what one can visualize ...
just see the positive side...
and smile .....
darkness is just for a while
so the longer part of day
in broad day light do smile
just don't in the darkness of life while
friend smile
see me
Smile!
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments
Ian.T
Mon, 2014-04-14 19:32
Loved
If it were not for darkness,
what would there be
to judge the light that you walk toward.
A good write young Bard I hope to see more of these from you,
Yours as always Ian.T
.
There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..
loved
Tue, 2014-04-15 01:50
you are that source of light.... like the sun
I am just a candle
how can it be shown
to the sun
by anyone...
loved
alidzain
Tue, 2014-04-15 17:52
loved
be it a candle
or the sun
light is often appreciated
when darkness comes
if that is untrue
then we won't see the moon
in the contrast of colours
its beauty won't bloom
Alid
loved
Wed, 2014-04-16 03:14
no one loves
blindness
thanks for ur composition
loved