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Our family
Family is all today
a small fragmented part in society
still continues to together stay
all others are friends
who lisp...
who except a loved one will ever kiss
a one fading into oblivion...
hoping one may stay with love and affection..
if it comes ones way
you are lucky
that I must say
New York still welcomes you
till this day
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Free verse
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Comments
mand
Tue, 2013-11-05 11:11
There is nothing like home
There is nothing like home sweet home. It's great when families stay together and good friends are something to be cheerished.
I like the homely feel of this one.
It sends a positive message.
Thanks for sharing!
LOve Mand xxxxx
loved
Tue, 2013-11-05 12:39
It sends a positive message.
thanks that's the purpose
a poet here is suffering
loved
wesley snow
Tue, 2013-11-05 17:11
This is my day...
another semi light hearted poem.
Thanks.
W. H. Snow
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loved
Tue, 2013-11-05 17:58
thanks
the snow man
comes along
after very long.....
loved
Ian.T
Tue, 2013-11-05 18:40
Loved
New York, now another place to search for you, I am so glad that you carry your home on your shoulders and wherever you are you put it down and make it so.
I can't make it to New York but the old one is just up the road from me, we will have to meet in Spirit young Bard.
Then the directive is that you should write a greeting to your friends here for all to see and for ever be, Yours Ian.T
.
There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..
loved
Tue, 2013-11-05 20:31
and who is god
And who is god
When I was young ...I asked my teacher ...ma'am why does the Earth have human beings... and why there are no more Earths elsewhere ....there must be
she said
No there is only one Earth and God made it
I asked who is God.
she put a finger on her lips....shh shh shh
today I read some news
NASA says 4.2 billion Earths elsewhere....
I think
God must be a factory man
A great manufacturer too
God bless!
loved
Ian.T
Wed, 2013-11-06 03:23
Answer
Naturally!! lol
Number 42
.
There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..
loved
Thu, 2013-11-07 11:14
42
yes 42 ..
women and children first
then men ...
spoke in in audible tones
the Captain Of the ship
Titanic
He knew of no other world
There was no
NASA..
then.....
loved
scribbler
Thu, 2013-11-07 22:52
hello
Family units are the final refuge from a world growing increasingly hostile to the individual.... ones way or one's way? Also it will be a cold day in hades before you'll find Me in New York lol...................stan
loved
Fri, 2013-11-08 00:10
this NEW YORK
reference is
becoz the poet belongs to NY
not I
thanks
Stan
loved