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o my not again
Blonde waitress
now you challenge me
Blonde waitress
a solo guy watches
all come and go
which one will come
then not go
awaiting some one
who has failed to come...
get up sailor
your time has come
God has sent you a free gift
go the
Blonde one
now lift
and
be this the aim of your life
do justice
as you may wish
sailor now you ought to be happy
the night is still young
a new story
has now sprung
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage:
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Comments
Josephus
Tue, 2013-04-16 21:00
Loved, my sweet friend
Well my sweet friend, I see you have found another muse to draw inspiration from. My pleasure!
Joe
My mind's writing cheques my body can't cash.
loved
Tue, 2013-04-16 21:50
we will be good friends
I assure you
you read me
and i shall too
tc
loved
Seren
Wed, 2013-04-17 09:26
Loved
this one really needs clarifying its a little bit of a mess and needs to be edited with a few words taken out and a few more thrown in
you have the skills to do this ;)
love JC x
“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” — W.B. Yeats
loved
Wed, 2013-04-17 09:49
which out
which in
do pitch in
loved