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my your beautiful face
your beautiful face
makes me tremble,
my heart beat can’t keep pace,
as i look at your charming face.
wow you are so young
you are so cool
at nineteen,
you’re the cynosure of many an eye,
so many will love for you to vie
you are astounding you know
meet me only just once
ere from the earth I go.
I love your beautiful smile
Oh! magnificent face
come and meet me
will you at my place?
you are exquisite you know
I can see your charm as you glow.
now you are blushing too
where are you,
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments
weirdelf
Sun, 2012-12-23 03:43
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cheers,
Jess
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'Rhythm and Meter in Poetry'
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loved
Sat, 2012-12-22 05:58
poem composed in 2010....
you may have the pleasure to pull me down
but I'm strong enough
not to be cowed down
regards sir
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loved
Sat, 2012-12-22 06:03
predator?????????????????
In ecology, predation describes a biological interaction where a predator (an organism that is hunting) feeds on its prey (the organism that is attacked).[1] Predators may or may not kill their prey prior to feeding on them, but the act of predation often results in the death of its prey and the eventual absorption of the prey's tissue through consumption.[2] Other categories of consumption are herbivory (eating parts of plants) and detritivory, the consumption of dead organic material (detritus). All these consumption categories fall under the rubric of consumer-resource systems
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weirdelf
Sun, 2012-12-23 03:43
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cheers,
Jess
A new workshop on the most important element of poetry-
'Rhythm and Meter in Poetry'
https://www.neopoet.com/workshop/rhythm-and-meter-poetry