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MY MOTHER
An always around queen
A loving heart with a sight for positivity
An enlightened personality without certificates
That's my mother; fountain of love
She's got a beautiful ebony black skin
And she shines like polished pure leather
A set of eyes you could behold love staring at
Colours aren't worth the description
A calm enduring love
An always forgiving heart
Strong to a fault
Very independent; the pride of pa.
Mom make available without a greed
My mother loves like no other
Her zeal is second to none
Though nature has reduced her heights greedily
Springs of love sprout from her heart
Even in nightmares I hear a faint echo of love singing in her heart
She relents never just for our taste
The queen of hearts, my mother, lives a contented life for all man's joy
Comments
Tracey Underwood
Fri, 2022-03-04 14:51
Loved it
This is a beautiful testament to your mom. It made me think of my mom. I lost her in 2001. There isnt a day that goes by that I dont think of her. Lovely poem! Thanks for sharing.
Love and light. Namaste.
Anza Matthias T...
Tue, 2022-03-22 03:20
Appreciation
Thanks fo reading my work.
Am sorry for not reaching out to you on time.
Candlewitch
Sat, 2022-03-05 11:35
hello,
as Tracey said, "lovely poem" and it is!
*hugs, Cat
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When someone reads your work
And responds, please be courteous
And reply in kind, thanks.
Anza Matthias T...
Tue, 2022-03-22 03:20
Kk
Thanks for reading
Ray Whitaker
Sat, 2022-03-05 15:32
WELCOME to the website!
Nice piece here.
I would add [only] some metaphysical/allegorical imagery that would enhance your writing here.
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Anza Matthias T...
Tue, 2022-03-22 03:22
Greetings
Thanks for taking your time and going through my work. I really appreciate this.