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Lucky Stars
I thank my lucky stars
and
bless you for your good wishes .
When the time comes
let nature take its recourse
and
let's go back to the creator ,
without remorse .
Then let the docs gape
and faces may they make
what a fool,
didn't let them their dollars make .
but why delay
and
bear the pain
one day that final day
will come again
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments
wesley snow
Tue, 2012-03-06 21:25
This is a sequel...
... right? Neither of these poems are "riddles" as you call them. I think they are quite straight forward and amusing with a sense of reality. wesley
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loved
Wed, 2012-03-07 09:06
your a gem
a real diamondic gem
loved