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Just wonder full...
How I wish I could benefit too,
Just by reading you,
Why have you taken?
A long spell to return
"Where [is] all the midnight oil
[That] you [burned]?"
In alleys and valleys,
Entwined, intermixed with joys and sorrows,
But whatever may have been your plight
Morrow after morrow,
It must have added to your strength
From which I dare to borrow
And your footsteps follow
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Fri, 2011-12-23 14:54
With my humble thanks
I have over ruled my self
as your interest in my poetry
overwhelms me
perhaps tis the maiden one ,
you have read
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