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green eyes! still unseen......
what fool must he be
to ignore lovely eyes
as yours
you have four boys
and
a girl
keep your family intact
each one is a pearl
including him
for whom your poem
now you unfurl
hope he does awake
from the slumber
in which he basks
and
its high time that
now he unmasks
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Mon, 2010-11-22 17:10
my perpetual
thanks for ur everlasting support
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Mon, 2010-11-22 17:09
thanks
removed the excess weight
t thanx
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