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An Endless Night!
An Endless Night
How long will that night be?
Can you say?
Kailashna Jee
A night remains young
For a few moments,
Then we all do sleep
Can the whole night
Keep us awake
Without making a mistake!
Except honeymooners two
I think we have passed that age
Both I and you
Still one never knows
When the sun does rise
In the arms of a fresh bride
A living son
In her womb does her arise.
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Comments
loved
Fri, 2011-01-21 17:22
if only you could go
for your honey moon to Paris
Then the Frenchy will feel shy
so will you
if Vanni sees him
smiling at you
WHAT IS VANNIS PHD SPECIALISATION?
loved
weirdelf
Fri, 2015-01-02 14:59
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cheers,
Jess
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lovedly
Fri, 2015-01-02 22:38
the dot
is sufficient to move along Jess
2011 anchored at sea
now being fished out only by u