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Your Admiration
Your Admiration
Is only because
your brain is so wired,
Despite your ailment
You are bright
While others not ill,
Are so much without
Depth, love and insight
Coz our brains are integrated
And
Cast at birth
While in the womb
And
The mom knows not
what she is thinking,
Of the loveliest new arrival
or the tomb
And
Her thoughts get transplanted
In our infant,
yet to be born ,
developing mind
Where can then ,anyone these two
Identical kind of brains ever find.
You remind me of a lost brother
And
So I hope you are one
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments
Candlewitch
Sat, 2011-10-29 13:06
Dear Loved,
Your poem inspires me to deep thought. Well done!
Always, Car
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faithmairee
Sun, 2011-10-30 22:45
Hi Loved
I've missed you terribly! I enjoyed your thought-provoking poem so much. It's great!
Love-Faith
There must be a poem in here somewhere.
loved
Fri, 2011-11-04 09:33
love to all those
who love loved
and my admiration now
is for you
both above
loved