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You Honour me more than I Deserve
Thanks,
Follow my style,
If it can please you
And
Shake up this world,
Of lonely followers...
Time moves on,
So should we too,
And
Take to the Eagles wings
Albeit,
We don't know
What all Eagles can achieve.
I do hope,
Others will follow soon.
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments
weirdelf
Fri, 2011-10-21 09:20
I've edited this comment,
Anna's comment has reminded me of my own better self and conscience.
I wish you all the best in your poetic endeavors while also urging you to strive for quality and improvement instead of quantity.
I know you have written some excellent poems and recognition is a wonderful thing.
cheers,
Jess
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Kailashana2
Wed, 2011-10-19 12:33
Poets are self-indulgent
Poets are self-indulgent narcissists Jess, get over it. However, we all can improve our art, the more we walk about. Remember how that was, Jess? I do. And I think that's what
Loved is saying here...but I may be wrong, though it's all about being loved, I think.
The dream of it being far more delusional than its reality, which sort of breaks eagles' wings.
lol. and ;-(
loved
Fri, 2011-10-21 09:09
thanks to you both
Today there are more poets,
than poetry readers
Yes narcissism is a disease ,
we must safeguard against
have a good day alll
loved