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Turn This Leaf
Turn This Leaf
If only I could fill up
all the leaves of the world,
One day I would become renowned,
But you know never will I be so crowned.
A bard though you may call me,
Others may think you are unsound,
But leaves some day will turn around,
Pages full you will read,
As upon my mind,
Alas!
So many breed...
Style / type:
Free verse
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Comments
Candlewitch
Mon, 2011-08-08 12:12
Hi, Loved,
Interesting and tender poem. Keep writing.
always, Cat
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Breakinglogic
Tue, 2011-08-09 01:40
I enjoy the relationships
I enjoy the relationships your writes have with the reader!
The title is an excellent choice for the theme, and plays well when read into the write.
Perhaps one day I'll turn a leaf and find you!
Here's hoping
cheer's,
logic
☆ raffy
loved
Tue, 2011-08-09 09:58
In hope we live and in amazement we dwell
In hope we live
And
In amazement we dwell
At which cross roads of life,
We shall meet none can tell,
But we continue to hope
And
With our desires and limitations we have to cope.
Perhaps we shall never,
But friends,
We shall be for ever.
HOPEFULLY
loved