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Three Liner This
Let me try
perhaps dear friend
replace the grave
with real grace
towards the end
enter you may
discover a grave..
hope you will
comment upon western
by Loved written
HA Ha Ha
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Structured: Western
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Comments
scribbler
Mon, 2011-11-28 09:35
hi loved
Well done but a bit harder to carry it through a longer poem isn't it? lol..........stan
loved
Mon, 2011-11-28 11:47
A comment on someones
three worded poem
hardly a poem just a try
thanks for the delligent scribble
loved
weirdelf
Tue, 2011-11-29 08:48
Oh happy days
Oh happy days
when a poet craves
to write with beauty, strength and truth
and not just jump up for attention,
that's uncouth
cheers,
Jess
A new workshop on the most important element of poetry-
'Rhythm and Meter in Poetry'
https://www.neopoet.com/workshop/rhythm-and-meter-poetry
loved
Tue, 2011-11-29 13:16
Hello Poet thanks.......
Who Is a Gifted Poet? Only You!
A poet's love for inspiration,
Is integrated in ones aspiration
And
A poet is one
Who composes without desperation...
In a moment, without any perspiration,
Then alone one can be
Deemed to be one.
loved
weirdelf
Tue, 2011-11-29 23:33
has anyone, besides me,
told you you talk a load of horse-shit?
I know you can write in plain english.
cheers,
Jess
A new workshop on the most important element of poetry-
'Rhythm and Meter in Poetry'
https://www.neopoet.com/workshop/rhythm-and-meter-poetry
loved
Wed, 2011-11-30 04:36
only you do
and
therefore i admire you even when i know
that u don't mean a damn ill...
thanks keep at it
i enjoy your sermons but remember i ain't no kid..
and you are only endeavouring to defame me openly
against all Neopoets norms ,
you vouch for
the admin is watching ,
they know you better than i do
STILL I CONVEY MY REGARDS IN CAPITALS
and why do you hatch on one at a time like a monkey does i wonder
loved
loved
Thu, 2011-12-01 08:02
the eerie silence
is unnerving >>>>>
loved
weirdelf
Thu, 2011-12-01 08:20
No, I do not seek to defame you.
You know I am one of your fans, to find the gems amongst your verbiage.
My real problem with you is when you post your own poems as comments on other people's poem. I think that is very rude and ignorant. Neopoet is a workshop, not a self-promotion site. If I see even one more instance of it I will report it to the AEC. I have already made them aware of this unfortunate habit you have.
Give real feedback in plain english to help people improve their poetry. I know you can, and it is what Neopoet is for.
cheers,
Jess
A new workshop on the most important element of poetry-
'Rhythm and Meter in Poetry'
https://www.neopoet.com/workshop/rhythm-and-meter-poetry
loved
Thu, 2011-12-01 08:31
They all know it...
If they ban ...as they did the BLOG ....
I shall abide by it
As I am mature enough
Not to be branded as a horse...
As your wont...
And you being a fan of mine,
Is like showing
A CANDLE TO THE SUN
And
You know it well.
I sincerely hope
That in the garbage bin of my vomit,
You are not trying to find some,
To stuff down my throat,
For the sake of posterity to know,
Not to fight a congregation of poets...
loved
weirdelf
Thu, 2011-12-01 08:34
Believe it or not
I care and am trying to help.
cheers,
Jess
A new workshop on the most important element of poetry-
'Rhythm and Meter in Poetry'
https://www.neopoet.com/workshop/rhythm-and-meter-poetry
loved
Thu, 2011-12-01 08:58
Thanks I have already so stated and i have no inhibitions
Thanks
I have already so stated and I have no inhibitions what so ever to restate it here. So that the cross section of all poets, would know what a scientist turned poet, by you all has to say.
I have no inhibitions what so ever to let everyone know,
I am not and may not be deemed to be a poet ,worthy of any poetic salt.
I rarely read poetry ,
as I don't want to become a victim
of being summoned for plagiarisation,
a word I learned from the Internet.
But I do read poetry of some of my models and I don’t really have any one particular in mind.
What I read instantly inspires me to compose off the cuff,
since I was eight.
Now I know you know I know nothing about the nuances of poetry,
except what this poet above has stated.
As far as reading aloud,
have no pity, I am half deaf nearing totality,
on account of some infection ,post accident
Take care I rarely read you,
but admire the sledge hammer,
With which you sculptor this non- poet
And
yet have the humility to still call yourself
A FAN..
I hope it’s not sarcasm, at its Zenith, Jess.
loved
weirdelf
Thu, 2011-12-01 09:03
yes I already read this
you seem to paste in promiscuously.
I only want to say one thing, again-
My real problem with you is when you post your own poems as comments on other people's poems or workshops. I think that is very rude and ignorant.
cheers,
Jess
A new workshop on the most important element of poetry-
'Rhythm and Meter in Poetry'
https://www.neopoet.com/workshop/rhythm-and-meter-poetry
loved
Thu, 2011-12-01 11:31
I do it all over the Internet and
so also so many post on mine .
This is an accepted norm
however i shall take care .
Bye
loved
weirdelf
Thu, 2011-12-01 11:37
It is not accepted or an accepted norm on Neopoet.
You know why? Because here you are an individual, and you don;t get away with that childish behavior, you get called on it.
cheers,
Jess
A new workshop on the most important element of poetry-
'Rhythm and Meter in Poetry'
https://www.neopoet.com/workshop/rhythm-and-meter-poetry
wesley snow
Thu, 2011-12-15 18:12
You know, Jess is right...
... in some respects. As for posting poetry as comment, I've known a lot of poets who have done so and I usually gripe at them about it. Not because it's rude per se, but because it limits their exposure to the people who would like to read their poetry.
But concerning the "way" you write (particularly in comments), I find it mysterious and often bewildering. I see you as the Harry Potter character Luna. Streams of near gibberish that if focused on reveal wisdom beyond our means. Though sometimes I wish you would just SAY something. Not all the time. I like the mysticism.
istan
W. H. Snow
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loved
Fri, 2011-12-16 06:37
Both Jess and You are
like the SLEDGE hammer and anvil,
upon whose wishes..
henceforth I will live
loved
loved
Tue, 2011-12-20 04:46
some variations
make life colourful
loved