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Under the Mistletoe
I came to you
on Christmas day
to express my love for you
for the joy that you brought
into my life
filled with a sense of warmth
to see the radiant smile
on your face
with the question
that I popped to you
down on my knee
in asking you
to be my lovely wife
my heart was hoping
for the answer to "Yes"!
in witnessing our lips
pressed gently against
each other
in celebrating this special occasion
with a truly blessing gift
on a holiday season
that instilled a great memory
to be cherished forever
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Jackweb
Tue, 2022-12-13 13:29
The word is:
I came to you
on Christmas day
to express my love for you
for the joy that you ×(bring) (brought)✓
into my life
Very nice meditation words fancy arrangement.
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"By virtue of creativity, my literary genre is poetry".
~Jackweb
Hon
Tue, 2022-12-13 15:47
Thank you for the feedback.
Thank you for the feedback. Yes, thank you for catching the past-tense usage.
Jackweb
Tue, 2022-12-13 16:40
You're welcome !
Dear poet!
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"By virtue of creativity, my literary genre is poetry".
~Jackweb
Triskelion
Wed, 2022-12-14 02:22
A little help?
..I don't see what the issue was with the word "bring". If you could explain it please.
Thanks
Thomas
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...so like my lost dreams...the flood
Lavender
Tue, 2022-12-13 19:06
The Mistletoe Wife
Hello Hon,
A lovely poem capturing a very special moment!
Thank you,
L
Rula
Wed, 2022-12-14 05:51
Hello hon
I am late to this thread, so I agree with Lavender.and wish you the best at the contest.
P.S May be you'd like to edit your title to go with the contest title( It should be the same) as a condition to win
Pls.find it here
https://www.neopoet.com/contest/december-2022-random-challenge-under-mis...
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lovedly
Thu, 2022-12-15 13:08
your rose is pink
I wonder if you know I am ROSE also
RoseBlack
Thu, 2022-12-29 19:57
What a fond and special memory
The holidays can bring such joy! Thank you for sharing.
~RoseBlack~