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A poet feels elated,
A poet feels elated,
If as much as one appreciates
a title, a word, a sentence
You have appreciated the whole poem.
It’s been worth my while,
My deafness brings,
Now no fears,
My failing eye-sight
A self projection,
Now brings no tears.
You have fanned my ego
Friend
I wish I could come
and
hold your hand.
Thanks once again,
For once in a while,
I write poetry,
Which is not,
My usual style
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Comments
loved
Tue, 2011-02-15 11:29
i thought u'd come to
read it
but perhaps it was twilight ,
the darkness beside
did my view hide
but still in dreams
have a ride
and say
i tried
loved
loved
Tue, 2011-02-15 12:17
COMPUTER IS A programmed IDIOT
IDIOT
THEY SIMPLY PUT QUESTION MARKS
MATHEMATICALLY
THEY CAN'T think
NOR THE PROGRAM MAKERS EITHER
THANKS FOR THE ELINATION ? YES MARK
loved
mand
Tue, 2011-02-15 11:40
Hi Loved
I love the appreciation and kindness of this poem. You are such a nice person.
Love Mand xxxxx
loved
Tue, 2011-02-15 12:14
Thank you very much
those who have a wilder ego than mine
curse me
ur vey kind
thanks
loved
Kailashana2
Tue, 2011-02-15 17:30
Who would curse you, only an
Who would curse you, only an ego would think they're important enough to be cursed. lol.
I like this poem but the second line would read better this way, I think:
If as much as one appreciates
a title, a word, a sentence
you have appreciated the poet (er I mean poem...but isn't poet what you really meant?) ;-)
~A
loved
Tue, 2011-02-15 18:35
Thank you Kailashna
you are more mature ,
than your age
i am sufferring from the
CANCER OF MY EGO
I thought you knew it.
Thanks the correction has been made.
Makes a better read now.
Though i will research
and replace the second time usuage of
appreciated
..........A poet feels elated,
If as much as one appreciates
a title, a word, a sentence
You have appreciated the whole poem..........
This was an on the spot poem ,
as a comment on some ones appreciation
of my other poem .
which one i can't trace .
loved