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MY TRIANOS
MY TRIANOS
is a new concept of thanking all those who comment on ones work
1.
Beautiful Fingers
Just so beautiful
Yesterday I saw
A young sweet girl
Very sweet,
Her fingers were as soft
As in the snap of yours,
Just ready to fall
I wanted to feel them too
But alas!
2.
Cost Of Living
In earlier times
We could eat a dozen chocolates
Now we have to think
A dozen times,
Wow the costs
They take my breath away.
3.
To Sqkeat Carol and Song bird
My heart felt thanks
Once again,
You hold my hand,
I shall hold out
And
Compose poems
Without a doubt,
That will bring
On your faces a smile,
As I too shall mirror
Yours all my while
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Comments
crypticbard
Wed, 2011-03-02 06:38
Most kind
and courteous of you to do so!
I am sure they will agree.
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'write on! let these words free.'
loved
Wed, 2011-03-02 12:17
thank you friend
Word Triano
I created the word
I thought...
Until
Thereafter
When
I perused
Google
The word already exists
As a surname
American
So nothing we alone create,
13.5 billions of years gone by,
Surely one has to have
A creative brain to come by,
To be absolutely original
So let’s not be
So hysterical!
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crypticbard
Wed, 2011-03-02 17:13
Perhaps so
but a new meaning or a nuance of such you have thus begun.
Coining new words and meanings is so much fun.
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'write on! let these words free.'
loved
Wed, 2011-03-02 20:51
and of course
once again i bow to thee
where shall i lie down
so that u can bless me
loved